Kia ora Room 13, Great to see your introductions of yourselves. I like the way you shared your favourite things. Some of my favourites are chocolate and being outside in the sunshine. Mrs Krausse
Hi, this is Room 12, We like your writing Ofa, It looks fantastic because is it neatly written. We like how you took your photo. How did you send your photo to Miss Maroc? Next time you could put the camera closer when you take a photo of your writing. How long did it take to do this writing blog post?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Room 13,
ReplyDeleteGreat to see your introductions of yourselves. I like the way you shared your favourite things. Some of my favourites are chocolate and being outside in the sunshine.
Mrs Krausse
Hi, this is Room 12,
ReplyDeleteWe like your writing Ofa, It looks fantastic because is it neatly written. We like how you took your photo. How did you send your photo to Miss Maroc? Next time you could put the camera closer when you take a photo of your writing. How long did it take to do this writing blog post?
Room 12, Otahuhu Primary