Children should get pocket money!
Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts
Thursday, September 16, 2021
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in by Rynav
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in
by Rynav
In my opinion New Zealand is the best country in the world! I will teach you why New Zealand is the best country, you see different kinds of people around the world!
Firstly, New Zealand is a wonderful country in the world. Why would people not agree? In New Zealand you can go fishing, you can take lots of fish - especially yummy ones!
Firstly, New Zealand is a wonderful country in the world. Why would people not agree? In New Zealand you can go fishing, you can take lots of fish - especially yummy ones!
Some believe that New Zealand is kind of a good country, and I know New Zealand is the really greatest country for me!
I am sure that when you come to New Zealand and you will see all the different kinds of animals!!!
For this reasons especially in New Zealand you can even go to Rainbows End. You can go on the big rides!! You can go to the ocean and swim!
Weekends should be three days long by Rynav
Weekends should be three days long
by Rynav
I believe that weekends should be three days long! Because you should spend time with your family.
It is important to spend time with your family so you can finish all your homework or clean and do your work.
I will tell you why the weekends should be three days - because you will get to do your work and your spelling.
The next day you can do three pages, of your homework. I am sure people will agree with me.
Some people believe that being with your family is nice, helpful. It's good and kind to finish all their problems.
This is why weekends there should be three day long weekends.
This is why weekends there should be three day long weekends.
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in by Jacob
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in
by Jacob
New Zealand is the best country and I will tell you why.
In New Zealand we are smart and nice.
Another important point why is because it is really hot and good weather.
How many people would agree that New Zealand is the best country? There are mountains and beaches, and who doesn't like beaches? It is so nice!
In New Zealand we are smart and nice.
Another important point why is because it is really hot and good weather.
How many people would agree that New Zealand is the best country? There are mountains and beaches, and who doesn't like beaches? It is so nice!
Weekends should be three days long by Jacob
Weekends should be three days long
by Jacob
I believe that weekends should be three days long, so you can do homework and rest for two days.
Two days is too short!
Definitely and most importantly weekends should be three days long so you can do your homework and spelling for two days.
Just think about it! Yes! You can do more work and rest longer and even spend time with your family.
It is absolutely good to spend time with your family and do your work. I will tell you why! So you can be smart and better at work!
Children should get pocket money! by Shazim
Children should get pocket money!
by Shazim
Everybody would agree that children should get pocket money because they will respect you just think about it!
If you give children money they will do the chores and they will clean their room
Children have to be responsible with money because they can save it for a bike.
It is certain because kids have to save money for healthy food.
In conclusion, just think about it! children should get pocket money!
If you give children money they will do the chores and they will clean their room
Children have to be responsible with money because they can save it for a bike.
It is certain because kids have to save money for healthy food.
In conclusion, just think about it! children should get pocket money!
The Cook Islands are the best country in the world to live in by Faith
The Cook Island is the best country in the world
by Faith
The Cook Islands are the best country because you can go to the pools!
You can spend time with your family and you can spend time having fun with your family!
I am sure you can agree that The Cook Islands is the best country.
I agree that Cook Islands is an amazing country and it is the best!
You can spend time with your family and you can spend time having fun with your family!
I am sure you can agree that The Cook Islands is the best country.
I agree that Cook Islands is an amazing country and it is the best!
Children should get pocket money! by Faith
Children should get pocket money!
by Faith
Everybody can agree that children should get pocket money.
Firstly you can help out your family, getting them amazing clothes. It is respectful to spend time with your family too!
It will be amazing to clean with your Mum so you can get pocket money.
You can even give your family pocket money so they can maybe get homework books for them too!
Then you can go to the shop to get a homework book to get smart too, with your family! Children should get pocket money!
Wednesday, September 15, 2021
Children should get pocket money! by Zinnur
Children should get pocket money!
by Zinnur
All children should be getting pocket money so they can save their money. They have to clean up after themselves because they can get pocket money from their parents and when they clean they can also get pocket money for when they do work.
Children can have pocket money and they can buy some things like a Ps5 and birthday presents or even some school supplies too. So kids should also learn not to be spending their money on everything.
Kids would not be very lazy because it is bad. Kids who get pocket money would not be lazy and learn to throw out the trash.
Finally and most importantly, kids should be getting pocket money and they should be not watching tv and they should clean up after themselves.
I have told you why kids should be getting pocket money they have to work hard and learn.
Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in by Zinnur
Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in
by Zinnur
I am sure that Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in because you can eat a lot of delicious food and see lots of different types of animals too.
Firstly, in Malaysia there are cool things in Malaysia. The main animal is a tiger. There are a lot of things to do, all you could ever want.
Secondly, in Malaysia there's cool things you can do. You could go anywhere you like. You could go to the big museum and you can go the rollercoaster too.
I believe you should go to Malaysia because it is the loveliest and most gorgeous country. It has a big waterfall! You could eat lots of cultured food too, like all the rice and curries.
This is why Malaysia is the best country!
Children should get pocket money! by Aanya
Children should get pocket money!
by Aanya
Children should get pocket money so the kids don't have to be lazy and just watch tv. Children should do the house chores and get pocket money so they can do it everyday.
If the kid is lazy that means the kid will not clean and no pocket money, that's why you should always take out the trash to get five bucks.
If the kid is lazy that means the kid will not clean and no pocket money, that's why you should always take out the trash to get five bucks.
Also, when the kid gets pocket money and the kid can buy the stuff they love and their favourite stuff and they can buy healthy food or good stuff. Or you can do more chores and buy stuff or buy lots of stuff, and that's why you should help your Mum and do the chores so you can get pocket money!
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in by Aanya
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in
by Aanya
I believe that New Zealand is the best country to live in. You can eat yummy food and go to the shops.
Firstly, there are nice animals in New Zealand. There are cats and dogs. Cute puppies and cute fish in the lake.
Firstly, there are nice animals in New Zealand. There are cats and dogs. Cute puppies and cute fish in the lake.
There are super pretty flowers in New Zealand. There's nice plants and good fruit trees and nice birds and a pretty sun.
I am sure that there is nice people in New Zealand and nice animals, and that is why New Zealand is a nice country to live in!
I am sure that there is nice people in New Zealand and nice animals, and that is why New Zealand is a nice country to live in!
Weekends should be three days long by Aanya
Weekends should be three days long
by Aanya
Weekends should be three days long because the first day you can go shopping. When you're tired you have two days to rest.
In my opinion, you can help your Mum with the chores, then the next day you can have fun - like going to swimming pools.
In my opinion, you can help your Mum with the chores, then the next day you can have fun - like going to swimming pools.
But I am sure that you can have more fun with three days, like buying food or going on a shopping spree.
I feel that you can have more fun with three weekend days you can go to the movies or go to the beach.
That's why three day weekends should be three days long.
I feel that you can have more fun with three weekend days you can go to the movies or go to the beach.
That's why three day weekends should be three days long.
Children should get Pocket Money by Hemi
Children should get Pocket Money
by Hemi
Everybody can agree that children should get pocket money they will also respect their family.
First, let's talk about why pocket money helps children to learn respect. I feel when I wash the dishes my Mum should pay me a bit of money because I've done work that my sisters didn't do and I get to keep the money for myself.
Another amazing reason why I want pocket money is so I can save up I can buy myself something for my birthday and Christmas to buy what I really want.
I want to share a memory that I have of my Nana telling me that every time I go to get the letters from the mailbox I would get $10.00 and if I also took the rubbish out I would get an extra $5.00.
Finally all my reasons why kids should get pocket money is written above, my conclusion is when I get my own home I will know how to clean and pay myself! Yipee!
First, let's talk about why pocket money helps children to learn respect. I feel when I wash the dishes my Mum should pay me a bit of money because I've done work that my sisters didn't do and I get to keep the money for myself.
Another amazing reason why I want pocket money is so I can save up I can buy myself something for my birthday and Christmas to buy what I really want.
I want to share a memory that I have of my Nana telling me that every time I go to get the letters from the mailbox I would get $10.00 and if I also took the rubbish out I would get an extra $5.00.
Finally all my reasons why kids should get pocket money is written above, my conclusion is when I get my own home I will know how to clean and pay myself! Yipee!
Children should get Pocket Money by Raina
Children should get Pocket Money
by Raina
Everybody can agree that having pocket money is good for children because then children will be good.
Firstly, children will clean and do all of their chores like vacumn cleaning and washing the dishes.
Secondly, children should get pocket money because they would be so greatful.
Thirdly, children will clean their room and clean the dishes.
I just explained why children should get pocket money.
Firstly, children will clean and do all of their chores like vacumn cleaning and washing the dishes.
Secondly, children should get pocket money because they would be so greatful.
Thirdly, children will clean their room and clean the dishes.
I just explained why children should get pocket money.
About me by Rheon
About me
by Rheon
My name is Rheon and I am seven years old.
My favourite food is sushi. My favourite friend is Jacob, Rynav and Shazim. My culture is Maori. My favourite colour is gold and my favourite thing to do is playing with my friends.
My favourite food is sushi. My favourite friend is Jacob, Rynav and Shazim. My culture is Maori. My favourite colour is gold and my favourite thing to do is playing with my friends.
Children should get Pocket Money by Cumorah
Children should get Pocket Money
by Cumorah
In my opinion children should get pocket money because children can save up their pocket money and get what they need.
Next, children could buy what they need like clothes. It is good because children can have more clothes and more money to buy dinner for the family it could be such a good time.
First, let's talk about why pocket money helps children. Children can be more helpful because they are able to buy their Mum presents. They would be able to help clean around the house.
Next, children could buy what they need like clothes. It is good because children can have more clothes and more money to buy dinner for the family it could be such a good time.
First, let's talk about why pocket money helps children. Children can be more helpful because they are able to buy their Mum presents. They would be able to help clean around the house.
In conclusion, you have to agree because of all I have said. Children should get pocket money.
Pukapuka is the best country in the world to live in by Ngateremaki
Pukapuka is the best country in the world to live in
by Ngateremaki
I believe that Pukapuka is the best country in the whole world. I love Pukapuka because the sun is bright and the food is delicious!
Firstly, you can eat fresh fish. Fish cooked on the barbeque, you can have crab or even turtle. It tastes delicious and yummy. The food is the best in the world.
You can have lots of fun in Pukapuka. You can play volleyball on the beach. You can swim under the water and see a lot of the fish and crabs.
Pukapuka is the best best because of the dancing. I love the drums and dancing it is so much fun!
In conclusion Pukapuka is the best country in the world and you have to go!
Firstly, you can eat fresh fish. Fish cooked on the barbeque, you can have crab or even turtle. It tastes delicious and yummy. The food is the best in the world.
You can have lots of fun in Pukapuka. You can play volleyball on the beach. You can swim under the water and see a lot of the fish and crabs.
Pukapuka is the best best because of the dancing. I love the drums and dancing it is so much fun!
In conclusion Pukapuka is the best country in the world and you have to go!
New Zealand is the best country to live in - Junior
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in
by Junior
In my opinion New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in. You can go to church, spend the day with your family and tidy the house.
Firstly, New Zealand has delicious food to eat. I love to eat the fresh fruit which is so healthy.
Secondly, New Zealand has awesome animals like turtles, seals, dolphins, baby dolphins and even whales.
Finally, New Zealand has Rainbows End where you can have fun riding on the roller coasters and go karts.
In conclusion, New Zealand is the best country to live in there are so many fun things to do in New Zealand! It is very cool!
Firstly, New Zealand has delicious food to eat. I love to eat the fresh fruit which is so healthy.
Secondly, New Zealand has awesome animals like turtles, seals, dolphins, baby dolphins and even whales.
Finally, New Zealand has Rainbows End where you can have fun riding on the roller coasters and go karts.
In conclusion, New Zealand is the best country to live in there are so many fun things to do in New Zealand! It is very cool!
Monday, September 13, 2021
Australia is the best country- Zaiden
In my opinion Australia is the best country in the world because it has such good food to eat and things to do.
First let's talk about the food. Australia has great fish and chips. I love to buy the fish and chips at the shop and take them home to eat.
Secondly, there are awesome animals in Australia like kangaroos, crocodiles, wombats and dingos.
Its cool to see all the different animals there. In Australia you can get a nice house because there are two storey houses.
By Zaiden
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