Pirate Story
by Shazim
Once upon a time, Shazim - me had red eyes and light blue hair. My age is 19 and I have a sporty body. My best friend is Hemi. He has red and blue hair and black eyes and his age is 20. My dogs name is Boyd he is a husky.
We were at Mission Bay, we were playing with our nerf guns and Boyd saw a pirate ship. He barked at Hemi and Hemi saw it too. We were anxious. Two pirates were charging at me and Hemi! But Boyd was going to bite their butts!
He was not finished yet! He bit one leg. The pirates weirdly went in the water and drowned. The other pirates got scared and sailed out to the another island. We were safe until we heard police sounds.
The police asked "Where are the pirates?"
"On the ship!"
The police took a police boat and arrested the pirates.
They were all safe.
The End
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