Cumorah- Undercover Cop!
by Cumorah
Once upon a time Cumorah, her cousin, Londyn, Lexy and her Auntie Sarah and Jessie were going to the the park. It was a sunny day, everyone was feeling good. Cumorah was an undercover police officer but she was wearing normal clothes. She has a police dog called Blue, it was a big scary Bull dog.
Cumorah was happily eating with her family and patting her dog when she could see a Pirate in the distance, moving closer and closer to the beach. They were looking through a telescope. They hopped out off the ship
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