Treasure Hunt by Rheon
Treasure Hunt
by Rheon
Once upon a time on a sunny day at Otahuhu Beach some boys from Otahuhu School were going on an adventure.
There was Rheon, he is eight years old with brown hair and blue eyes. He was a little short. There was Rynav, he was seven years old with short brown hair and red eyes. He was so funny and always made his friends laugh.
There was Jacob, a boy with blue hair he was 10 years old and super sporty. There was Jahvayus, he had short brown hair, he was tall and silly. There was also Ngatere, he was 8 years old with black hair he was tall and had brown eyes. Last but not least there was Shazim. He was 8 years old with short hair and black eyes.
Aadil brought a metal detector from home. All of the boys wanted to go to the beach to find treasure. Rheon and his friends were helping Aadil when suddenly the metal detector started to beep.
"Everyone come!" Aadil shouted.
All the boys ran over. All the boys grabbed a shovel and happily started digging.
Something hit the shovel, the boys started using their hands and found a brown and yellow shiny treasure chest.
Everyone said "Wow!" at the same time.
Then they saw a pirate. A really mad pirate on a ship, he got out of the ship. He looked at the treasure chest and snatched it.
He said "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA"
The boys said "Give it back!"
The boys wanted revenge. The boys snuck onto the pirate ship. The boys saw the pirate and they acted like they fell into the pirate trap. The pirate came to look but he didn't see the boys, he looked behind him and saw the boys. Then the boys pushed the pirate into the traps. They took the treasure chest back and went back to the beach.
They gave some of the lost treasure to the bad pirate, then the mad pirate became a good pirate. The pirate said sorry for stealing the treasure chest they lived happily ever after.
The End
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