Pirate Escape
by Aadil
It was a hot summers dan and my family went to the beach. We felt happy. Manukau Beach looked like there was a lot of people that also came to the beach.
There was a big bang. I saw pirates coming out of the ship. I am really scared. I start running towards my family sitting on the chairs talking. I am feeling tired from running but I MUST WARN THEM! I start yelling "Pirates! Run!"
Pirates are very angry because my families in their territory. They had some gold coins and jewellery next to a tree where my family were having a picnic.
I quickly went to tell my family to move from the tree.
"PIRATES ARE COMING! HURRY UP AND MOVE!"
My family all got into our big van. My Mum drove fast all the way home. I was thinking if I would ever see the Pirates again. The Pirates got their treasure and were very happy.
The End
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