Thursday, September 16, 2021

Descriptive paragraph: Autumn by Rynav

 

by Rynav

I can see lots of people walking around the water fountain.

I see a boy playing on the long slide.

I can feel leaves falling on me. 

I feel really excited because I am going to eat ice-cream.

i hear people talking about lots of things and I hear big loud air around the whole place.


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