Pirate Story
by Zinnur
Once upon a time there was a girl called Lia! She was with her family which is her Mum and Dad and Emma and Ivy and Mia and Dinasen. Dinasen was five years old and Lia was 21 years old and Emma was ten years old and Mia was four years old. Ivy was 8 years old.
Lia had blonde hair with blue eyes and white skin and a purple bow and her dress is pink and beautiful with a black sport crop top.
Mia has black hair and she has green eyes and she has a pink bow and purple dress.
Ivy has blonde hair just like Lia and Ivy. She has hazel eyes and she has a blue dress. Dinasen has black hair and he has brown eyes and he has a green shirt, orange pants and has cool sunglasses.
They are having a picnic at the beach. There was a pirate coming to the beach and Mia was so scared that she thought she was going to get kidnapped, so she told her parents "Mum! Dad! I saw a pirate! Coming with a boat to the beach!"
"What?! No way! There's no pirates at the beach! They're only at the sea, so I don't trust you Mia"
"Oh I know you never trust me!"
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