by Jacob
Once upon a time Potter, he was a Rocketman. His job was to go to space. He knows all about space so on friday he went to space, he saw Earth and his Rocketship was an electric one and he saw all the planets like Mars the Sun, a black hole (a lot of rocks). He felt happy because he was at space he saw a lot of colourful planets he was so amazed. He saw a Rocketman, lots of Rocketmen they were really friendly.
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