Birthday Story
by Jacob
I saw cakes and and people singing happy birthday.
I was feeling excited and I smell cakes and chocolate ice-cream.
The weather was warm. My Uncle was out with his friends and had yum cakes.
I felt cakes and ice-cream and chocolate milk.
I could hear people talking and laughing loud.
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