Thursday, September 16, 2021

Pirate story by Rynav

 

Pirate Story

by Rynav


Once upon a time Rynav, with black hair and a smiley face and his beautiful family were going on a nice shiny day to the beach. His Dad, Grandma, Grandpa, Sister and Rynav went to have a picnic to have lots of fun. They had so much food. Suddenly, they heard a big bang!

Someone was screaming, Rynav and his sister were really scared. Their Mum and Dad said "What happened?"
Rynav and his sister were silent.
After that, Rynav's Dad said "Don't worry" Rynav and his sister said "Ok" they could smell pirate breath.

A few minutes later they suddenly heard stomping coming towards them. Rynav's sister freaked out so loudly, panicking! Rynav's family were really afraid they were so confused. His family said "What are they trying to do?" Rynav's sister screamed. Rynav said "I don't know!"
Everything was terrible, those pirates were really dangerous. Rynav was confused.

His Dad said "Let's make a plan!" They all agreed.
His Dads plan was that they all hide and Rynav's sister distracts the pirates.
Rynav's Dad kicked and punched the pirates.

He then heard some music, then he heard Police's sirens coming towards them and the police said "Where are the pirates?" We said "We threw them in the long big tree!" 
They asked "There?" we said "Yes!"
The police went and caught them. We were really happy because the pirates were trying to steal our money and the police caught them and then we had the treasure.

The End

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