Trip to the zoo
by Jahvayus
Me and my Mum and Dad and cousins went to the zoo. We felt good we saw zebras and giraffes.
An evil man has been spying on my family and my cousin and we didn't notice. The evilman pulls up and captures my cousin. He takes my cousin to a dangerous basement.
Me and my Mum and Dad went to catch the man that stole my cousin he took us to a forest.
We go and sneak inside his basement in the forest. We have to search the forest for a key to unlock my cousin from his cage.
The Man caught us and my Mum and Dad called the Police. The man went to jail and we were free!
An evil man has been spying on my family and my cousin and we didn't notice. The evilman pulls up and captures my cousin. He takes my cousin to a dangerous basement.
Me and my Mum and Dad went to catch the man that stole my cousin he took us to a forest.
We go and sneak inside his basement in the forest. We have to search the forest for a key to unlock my cousin from his cage.
The Man caught us and my Mum and Dad called the Police. The man went to jail and we were free!
The End.
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