Saving Calvin
by Ishika
Once upon a time Ishika, her Mum, Dad and brother went out on a sunny, shiny day to Sunset beach they were so happy because they were talking about surprising the kids with a picnic.
Ishika was an 8 year old girl with long black hair and brown eyes. She was so tall and beautiful like the sunset. Her brother is called Calvin he is 11 years old. He was really tall. He was really annoying to Ishika because he kept taking Ishika's Ipad away.
The whole family were walking to the picnic when the rain suddenly started to fall down. It was so stormy and freezing. Cold water started flooding.
"Let's get to the car!" Ishika's Dad shouted.
They all ran to the car to get out of the rain. Ishika noticed that Calvin was not there
"Calvin's not here!"
"Oh goodness! We have to find him!" Ishika's Dad shouted, they heard a really, really loud scream.
Ishika went out of the car to look, it was still stormy and rainy but she didn't care she still felt bad because she thought Calvin was dead.
She suddenly found Calvin under the tree sitting there and doing nothing. His leg was stuck in the mud next to the tree. Ishika had thought he was dead but he was sitting there by the tree. Calvin screamed. "No!"
Suddenly Ishika saw five fat, scary, ugly pirates. They came over and said
"Oh can we help?"
Ishika trusted them and said "Ok, but don't do anything bad to him!"
They held his hands and started pulling.
Calvin said "I'm getting saved! finally!"
The End
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