Pirate Story
by Aanya
Once upon a time there was a girl who was called Rose. She has pretty brown hair and green eyes and her dress is red and has roses on it. She is 16 years old and she has a sister called Zoey. She has brown hair and blue eyes. She has a pink dress with light pink flowers on it. She has an older brother that is 20 years old. His name is Liam he has black hair and brown eyes.
Rose asked Mum if Liam, Zoey and her could go to the beach to have a picnic.
Mum said yes, so all of them got their beach stuff, they went to the beach. Zoey saw a pirate. Three pirates came up to Zoey and kidnapped her. Zoey was screaming.
Liam told Rosie that he heard screaming, Rosie saw the pirate holding a bag so Rosie ran fast and punched the pirate in the face. The pirate was hurt. The pirate was running as fast as he could, but then Liam kicked the pirate and punched him in the face two times. The pirate was crying and crying and went into the water.
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