Showing posts with label Zinnur. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Zinnur. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 15, 2021

Children should get pocket money! by Zinnur

  Children should get pocket money!

by Zinnur

All children should be getting pocket money so they can save their money. They have to clean up after themselves because they can get pocket money from their parents and when they clean they can also get pocket money for when they do work.

Children can have pocket money and they can buy some things like a Ps5 and birthday presents or even some school supplies too. So kids should also learn not to be spending their money on everything.

Kids would not be very lazy because it is bad. Kids who get pocket money would not be lazy and learn to throw out the trash.

Finally and most importantly, kids should be getting pocket money and they should be not watching tv and they should clean up after themselves.

I have told you why kids should be getting pocket money they have to work hard and learn.

Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in by Zinnur

 


Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in


by Zinnur

I am sure that Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in because you can eat a lot of delicious food and see lots of different types of animals too.

Firstly, in Malaysia there are cool things in Malaysia. The main animal is a tiger. There are a lot of things to do, all you could ever want.

Secondly, in Malaysia there's cool things you can do. You could go anywhere you like. You could go to the big museum and you can go the rollercoaster too. 

I believe you should go to Malaysia because it is the loveliest and most gorgeous country. It has a big waterfall! You could eat lots of cultured food too, like all the rice and curries.

This is why Malaysia is the best country!

Pirate Story by Zinnur

 

Pirate Story

by Zinnur


Once upon a time there was a girl called Lia! She was with her family which is her Mum and Dad and Emma and Ivy and Mia and Dinasen. Dinasen was five years old and Lia was 21 years old and Emma was ten years old and Mia was four years old. Ivy was 8 years old.

Lia had blonde hair with blue eyes and white skin and a purple bow and her dress is pink and beautiful with a black sport crop top.
Mia has black hair and she has green eyes and she has a pink bow and purple dress.
Ivy has blonde hair just like Lia and Ivy. She has hazel eyes and she has a blue dress. Dinasen has black hair and he has brown eyes and he has a green shirt, orange pants and has cool sunglasses.


They are having a picnic at the beach. There was a pirate coming to the beach and Mia was so scared that she thought she was going to get kidnapped, so she told her parents "Mum! Dad! I saw a pirate! Coming with a boat to the beach!"
"What?! No way! There's no pirates at the beach! They're only at the sea, so I don't trust you Mia"
"Oh I know you never trust me!"

Descriptive paragraph: Autumn by Zinnur

 

by Zinnur

I can see alot of leaves are flowing on my body and face.

I can see some orange, yellow and colourful leaves and I can see some leaves on the ground.

I can smell pumpkin pie around the trees.

I can smell autumn pie around the forest.

I can taste hot chocolate dripping on my mug.


My Favourite Person by Zinnur

 

My Favourite Person

by Zinnur

My favourite person is my Dad called Saifuddin. He looks like whitish and he has a beard next by his cheeks, they are brown. I like to go shopping with my Dad and with my Mum because he is the best Dad ever. We played uno with my family and my Dad helps me with my homework.


The End

Character description: Simba by Zinnur

Simba

by Zinnur

Simba has a long tail. His eyes are orange and yellow. His whole body is yellow. He has sharp teeth and he is so soft.

Simba is so cute, his tail is so soft and his nose is pink and his eyes are pink and yellow. 

Simba is a lion.

Simba is the kindest animal, he has a powerful roar. He has a friend he becomes bigger and becomes stronger. 
Simba was kind and helpful.
Simba was very strong.

Character description: Spongebob by Zinnur

 


Spongebob

by Zinnur

The Spongebob is big and fat and his teeth are wobbly and his nose is long. He has big eyes and he is a sponge.

The Spongebob is funny. He is loud and he is big.

He has black shoes and he wears white socks. He is so happy and he has a bowtie and he is chubby and funny.

Spongebob is hilarious and he is yellow and he is a sponge and he has a pineapple house.

Character Description: The Grumpy Bear by Zinnur

 

by Zinnur

The bear is mean. He was stomping as hard as he can.

The cranky bear was so mad that he can shout and stomp.

The bear looks like a big elephant and he has elephant feet that are big like a little mouse.

The big bear is like an elephant, he is soft and he can sleep.

The bears face is like a little ant.

The bears body is so big he can be a big elephant.

Change the sentence: The Man was laughing by Zinnur

 

by Zinnur

The crazy man was so loud! He was laughing so hard.

The lazy man was really red like a tomato.

He was giggling so loud the neighbours could hear him.

The loud man was so crazy.

The hilarious man was screaming.

The funny man was so loud.


Character description: Pig the Pug by Zinnur

 

Pig the Pug

by Zinnur

Pig the Pug is fatter than an elephant. He eats junk food and he is so selfish! 

Change the sentence: The Cat was sleepy by Zinnur

 

by Zinnur

This cat is so sleepy and she is lazy too! She always sleeps at the night and she sleeps in dark places and she is a sleepy cat.

This sleepy cat is so lazy and she lays down on her break. She feels warm. She is sleepy.

The lazy cat was a sleepy and she looks like a marshmallow.

Monday, September 13, 2021

Olympics Art

Room 13 had been working on Olympics art. They painted a background, mixing colours and trying to make sure it stood out. They cut out and coloured their Olympic rings and even chose their countries flags to add to their picture.

 Campbell



 Maeva



  Zinnur



 Raina


 Rheon

 Shanaya

 Ishika


 Zaiden



 Umaiza


 Ofa


 Aadil

 Cumorah


 Faith