Pirate Story
by Faith
My family and me quickly get my cousins. Her name is Nona. Then soon me and my family and Mum went to the lovely Otahuhu Park. Next, we went back to my families place, then we played with my family and then my cousin Nona spotted a pirate on the Otahuhu Park.
Then, my cousin Nona got scared so she said to me and my family and Mum got scared then she and my family and my Mum got really really scared. So then we went inside and then we all went inside the room.
We all got scared in the room. We all went to get my Mums phone. Then we called the Policeman the police got the pirates. My family is happy now and my Mum saw the police take all the many pirates. The pirates were scared.
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