Once upon a time my family and our dog went to Otahuhu Beach. We were having a picnic. My Mum saw a boat with pirates on it. My sister Cynthia and my brother Ashik were playing on the sand making a sand castle. My Mum called out to my sister, me and my brother to come to her. My Dad was playing with my dog named Ella.
I saw a pirate was running to catch my sister she couldn't see the pirate because she was playing on the sand. I screamed "There's a pirate! He is going to steal my sister!"
The pirate was a scary angry woman who wanted to take Cynthia to be her pirate daughter.
I yelled "Don't take my sister!" and I ran up to her and smacked her in the face.
she started to cry like a frog. I called the police on 111.
There was 10 police cars that came. There were a group of pirates hiding behind the trees and the police saw them. They got all the pirates and they put them in the car. The police dropped the pirates in the jail. Cynthia was still looking for the dog Ella and found her in the sand. Cynthia frowned
"What are you doing you naughty dog?"
The End
By Aanvi
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