Children should get pocket money!
Thursday, September 16, 2021
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in by Rynav
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in
by Rynav
In my opinion New Zealand is the best country in the world! I will teach you why New Zealand is the best country, you see different kinds of people around the world!
Firstly, New Zealand is a wonderful country in the world. Why would people not agree? In New Zealand you can go fishing, you can take lots of fish - especially yummy ones!
Firstly, New Zealand is a wonderful country in the world. Why would people not agree? In New Zealand you can go fishing, you can take lots of fish - especially yummy ones!
Some believe that New Zealand is kind of a good country, and I know New Zealand is the really greatest country for me!
I am sure that when you come to New Zealand and you will see all the different kinds of animals!!!
For this reasons especially in New Zealand you can even go to Rainbows End. You can go on the big rides!! You can go to the ocean and swim!
Weekends should be three days long by Rynav
Weekends should be three days long
by Rynav
I believe that weekends should be three days long! Because you should spend time with your family.
It is important to spend time with your family so you can finish all your homework or clean and do your work.
I will tell you why the weekends should be three days - because you will get to do your work and your spelling.
The next day you can do three pages, of your homework. I am sure people will agree with me.
Some people believe that being with your family is nice, helpful. It's good and kind to finish all their problems.
This is why weekends there should be three day long weekends.
This is why weekends there should be three day long weekends.
How did this Giraffe get on the moon? By Rynav
by Rynav
The giraffe was flying in a a jetpack everywhere and he had so much fun and after seconds the gas finished, he was running out of fuel so the giraffe fell from so high and he fell from so high and he landed on the big moon!!!
He made a smiley.
He made a smiley.
Pirate story by Rynav
Pirate Story
by Rynav
Once upon a time Rynav, with black hair and a smiley face and his beautiful family were going on a nice shiny day to the beach. His Dad, Grandma, Grandpa, Sister and Rynav went to have a picnic to have lots of fun. They had so much food. Suddenly, they heard a big bang!
Someone was screaming, Rynav and his sister were really scared. Their Mum and Dad said "What happened?"
Rynav and his sister were silent.
After that, Rynav's Dad said "Don't worry" Rynav and his sister said "Ok" they could smell pirate breath.
A few minutes later they suddenly heard stomping coming towards them. Rynav's sister freaked out so loudly, panicking! Rynav's family were really afraid they were so confused. His family said "What are they trying to do?" Rynav's sister screamed. Rynav said "I don't know!"
Everything was terrible, those pirates were really dangerous. Rynav was confused.
His Dad said "Let's make a plan!" They all agreed.
His Dads plan was that they all hide and Rynav's sister distracts the pirates.
Rynav's Dad kicked and punched the pirates.
He then heard some music, then he heard Police's sirens coming towards them and the police said "Where are the pirates?" We said "We threw them in the long big tree!"
They asked "There?" we said "Yes!"
The police went and caught them. We were really happy because the pirates were trying to steal our money and the police caught them and then we had the treasure.
The End
Descriptive paragraph: Autumn by Rynav
by Rynav
I can see lots of people walking around the water fountain.
I see a boy playing on the long slide.
I can feel leaves falling on me.
I feel really excited because I am going to eat ice-cream.
i hear people talking about lots of things and I hear big loud air around the whole place.
My favourite person by Rynav
My Favourite Person
by Rynav
My favourite person is my Dad because he plays soccer with me. He looks like my robot. I like to play hide and seek with him. I choose him because he looks cool like a Superhero!
Simba by Rynav
Simba
by Rynav
Simba has a big kingdom, he has a smooth golden tail he is the Lion King of the kingdom. He is friends with all of the animals. He is really brave too. He likes to eat fish, he has so much strength in his big body he is even a really powerful lion! Simba is the strongest in his country, him and his Dad.
Simba has small hair on his head, he has big muscles. He has a smooth, skinny tail. Simba has fat eyes. He is really nice. Simba has big fat nails.
Simba is happy all the time. He is gold, shiny. He is really clean.
Spongebob by Rynav
Spongebob
by Rynav
Spongebob has a shiny nose like a shiny mirror. He has big eyes like big balls. Spongebob has a friend called Patrick.
Spongebob looks like little toys, he is a big sponge to wash everything. He is yellow like cheese to eat. He has skinny legs like sticks. He has gap teeth like broken cars, and he laughs really loud.
He acts like real mans in the world. He does really hard work in mechanics.
Tigers by Rynav
by Rynav
Did you know tigers are the biggest cats in the world?
Did you know tigers are really beautiful and strong!
Did you know they are really powerful.
Did you know tigers live in forests in Indonesia?
Did you know tigers spend time in the water all the time.
Did you know tigers live in really cold places?
Did you know that tigers are even meat eaters.
Did you know tigers have two or three cubs at a time.
Character Description: The Grumpy Bear by Rynav
by Rynav
Grumpy Bear is funny and fat. He is sleepy and really fit and strong. He likes to eat chocolate. He always gets help. He looks like Tim Tam chocolates he even looks like a rocket ship. He has flower legs. He is really fat like a horse.
Change the sentence: The Man was laughing by Rynav
by Rynav
The crazy man looked like he was crying and he started to laugh!
The first man was laughing just like he is going to Rainbows End!
The mental man didn't know anything so he was laughing out loud.
The zoo man was laughing because he had a holiday.
Character description: Pig the Pug by Rynav
Pig the Pug
by Rynav
Pig the pug is stinky and really fat - not good. He has sharp eyes, big eyeballs and he is ugly. He has a long tongue, he is a mean dog. He has tiny legs.
He is big but he is really greedy he eats too much food. He doesn't share any food, he is so fat, like an elephant! He has small teeth. He is cute but he is really bad.
He is lazy like zebras. He has a big black mouth like chocolate. He runs so slow like a turtle. He is so greedy, fat and ugly.
He doesn't shower. He barks really loud. He is a big show off. He has a lot of gold chains, like Hemi.
The End
Change the sentence: the man ran fast by Rynav
by Rynav
The brilliant man came from galaxy running from afar.
The smart boy was running like he was jogging.
The Spiderman was running really speedy that he crashed into the wall.
The cool man was running really speedily and he fell in the water.
The fat man was running really slowly that it was turning into night.
Change the sentence: The Cat was sleepy by Rynav
by Rynav
This snoring cat was sleeping on his own chair with his eyes open.
The greedy cat was snoring inside his small playing house.
The boring cat was sleeping he was nearly dead.
The amazing cat was sleeping outside his neighbours house.
The annoying cat was about to go out, but next she fell asleep.
The fast cat was running speedily and it fell asleep.
The lazy cat was really sleepy, then it saw his own reflection and it slept.
About me by Rynav
About me
by Rynav
My name is Rynav. I am nine years old. I go to Otahuhu Primary School. My favourite food is noodles. My friends are Shazim, Rheon, Junior and Aadil. I am from New Zealand but I am Indian. My favourite colour is blue. I always play Fortnite it is really, really fun. My favourite thing is toys.
How did this Giraffe get on the moon? By Jacob
by Jacob
Once upon a time Potter, he was a Rocketman. His job was to go to space. He knows all about space so on friday he went to space, he saw Earth and his Rocketship was an electric one and he saw all the planets like Mars the Sun, a black hole (a lot of rocks). He felt happy because he was at space he saw a lot of colourful planets he was so amazed. He saw a Rocketman, lots of Rocketmen they were really friendly.
The End
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in by Jacob
New Zealand is the best country in the world to live in
by Jacob
New Zealand is the best country and I will tell you why.
In New Zealand we are smart and nice.
Another important point why is because it is really hot and good weather.
How many people would agree that New Zealand is the best country? There are mountains and beaches, and who doesn't like beaches? It is so nice!
In New Zealand we are smart and nice.
Another important point why is because it is really hot and good weather.
How many people would agree that New Zealand is the best country? There are mountains and beaches, and who doesn't like beaches? It is so nice!
Weekends should be three days long by Jacob
Weekends should be three days long
by Jacob
I believe that weekends should be three days long, so you can do homework and rest for two days.
Two days is too short!
Definitely and most importantly weekends should be three days long so you can do your homework and spelling for two days.
Just think about it! Yes! You can do more work and rest longer and even spend time with your family.
It is absolutely good to spend time with your family and do your work. I will tell you why! So you can be smart and better at work!
Descriptive paragraph: Autumn by Jacob
by Jacob
I could see water that was very dirty like mud and see a farm with cows and pigs. I could also see birds in the sky, they were black and white - they were big birds.
My Favourite Person by Jacob
My Favourite Person
by Jacob
My favourite person is my Mum because she is nice and funny and always buys me stuff, and that is nice. She looks white and nice. She is good at cooking and cleaning and her name is Caily and her hair is black and my Mums culture is cook Island.
Character description: Simba by Jacob
Simba
by Jacob
He is gold and a better King than his Dad. He is always nice to his best friends. He is brave and funny. He roars are loud and powerful. He's so cute like a baby. He also has a big kingdom and he has fur thats really gold and soft. He is a big king and is strong like a Superman.
Birthday Story by Jacob
Birthday Story
by Jacob
I saw cakes and and people singing happy birthday.
I was feeling excited and I smell cakes and chocolate ice-cream.
The weather was warm. My Uncle was out with his friends and had yum cakes.
I felt cakes and ice-cream and chocolate milk.
I could hear people talking and laughing loud.
Character description: Spongebob by Jacob
Spongebob
by Jacob
Spongebob is funny and hilarious. He is yellow like a cheetah and he lives in the sea. Spongebob works at a shop area he is dumb and is so annoying. He is always happy, he has blue eyes. He looks like a sponge, a yellow sponge. He likes to laugh loud and giggle. He wears brown pants and is big like a whale and he is tall and he cooks burgers.
Character Description: The Grumpy Bear by Jacob
by Jacob
The cranky bear was mad at people.
The bear was soft, he was afraid of dogs.
This bear likes helping people he looks as big as a hippo.
Change the sentence: The Man was laughing by Jacob
by Jacob
The funny man was laughing he turned into a potato.
The mad man was laughing over sad things.
The hilarious man was giggling, his friends could hear him.
The giggling man was giggling so much he was a red pepper.
The crazy man was laughing crazy and he turned into an apple, a fat apple.
Character description: Pig the Pug by Jacob
Pig the Pug
by Jacob
Pig the Pug is so mean and fat. He will never share his food. He always forgets to share and he likes to win every time. His colour is black.
Pig the pug is funny and selfish.
He has big eyes.
Pig the pug was so big and hilarious.
Change the sentence: the man ran fast by Jacob
by Jacob
This fast man was running so fast.
The sporty man was playing soccer.
Change the sentence: The Cat was sleepy by Jacob
by Jacob
My orange sleepy cat was so tired. He yawned and fell asleep in his warm bed, then he found fish to eat. the cat can jump high and can climb trees, my cat likes to play with his toys outside. He was so tired and comfortable he fell asleep again.
About me by Jacob
About me
by Jacob
My name is Jacob, my culture is Samoan and Cook Island Maori. My favourite colour is blue and I like to play volleyball, soccer and basketball. My favourite things are Fortnite and my friends are Rheon and Matiu. My favourite food is porridge and I like to drink coke. My favourite animal is a cheetah.
Children should get pocket money! by Shazim
Children should get pocket money!
by Shazim
Everybody would agree that children should get pocket money because they will respect you just think about it!
If you give children money they will do the chores and they will clean their room
Children have to be responsible with money because they can save it for a bike.
It is certain because kids have to save money for healthy food.
In conclusion, just think about it! children should get pocket money!
If you give children money they will do the chores and they will clean their room
Children have to be responsible with money because they can save it for a bike.
It is certain because kids have to save money for healthy food.
In conclusion, just think about it! children should get pocket money!
Pirate Story by Shazim
Pirate Story
by Shazim
Once upon a time, Shazim - me had red eyes and light blue hair. My age is 19 and I have a sporty body. My best friend is Hemi. He has red and blue hair and black eyes and his age is 20. My dogs name is Boyd he is a husky.
We were at Mission Bay, we were playing with our nerf guns and Boyd saw a pirate ship. He barked at Hemi and Hemi saw it too. We were anxious. Two pirates were charging at me and Hemi! But Boyd was going to bite their butts!
He was not finished yet! He bit one leg. The pirates weirdly went in the water and drowned. The other pirates got scared and sailed out to the another island. We were safe until we heard police sounds.
The police asked "Where are the pirates?"
"On the ship!"
The police took a police boat and arrested the pirates.
They were all safe.
The End
My Favourite Person by Shazim
My Favourite Person
by Shazim
My favourite person is Jacob because he is good at soccer and spelling. He really likes Fortnite. He has black hair and his skin colour is brownish light. His culture is Cook Island and Samoan. Me and Jacob are the same speed. We play soccer everyday!
Character description: Spongebob by Shazim
Spongebob
by Shazim
Spongebob looks like cheese. He has skinny hands and legs. He has dots on his face.
Spongebob doesn't know how to drive. Spongebob cooks crabby patties. He plays with his pet snail Gary.
Tigers by Shazim
by Shazim
Did you know tigers are big and beautiful animals.
Did you know tigers are really strong and powerful too!
Did you know tigers live in the forest.
Did you know a female tiger usually has two or three cubs at one time.
Character Description: The Grumpy Bear by Shazim
by Shazim
The angry bear is really cranky.
The cranky bear is mean.
The fuzzy bear is kind.
The angry bear looks fat.
The cranky bear looks big.
The kind bear looks fluffy.
Change the sentence: The Man was laughing by Shazim
by Shazim
The lazy man was laughing like a clown.
The mental man was laughing so loud that his face went red.
The rich man was laughing like a murderer.
The crazy man was laughing so loud that the neighbourhood could hear him.
Change the sentence: the man ran fast by Shazim
by Shazim
This galaxy man was sprinting.
The speedy man zoomed fast.
The lazy man galloped.
The crazy man was so speedy.
The scared man exhilarated down, he fell.
Change the sentence: The Cat was sleepy by Shazim
by Shazim
This greedy cat was so lazy he fell on his warm bed and he fell asleep.
The night was dark and cold! The cat was still warm. One minute later the cat was sleep walking. When he was sleep walking he ate his food, then he tripped into his bed./
One windy night there was a cat his name is Greedy Cat and he was greedy and lazy and sometimes he was sleepy and tired.
About me by Shazim
About me
by Shazim
My name is Shazim. I am eight years old. I learn at Otahuhu Primary School. My friends are Rheon, Rynav, Junior and Aadil. I am an Indian kid. My favourite colours are red, blue, gold and silver. I play Fortnite. My favourite food is pancakes.
Pirate Story by Faith
Pirate Story
by Faith
My family and me quickly get my cousins. Her name is Nona. Then soon me and my family and Mum went to the lovely Otahuhu Park. Next, we went back to my families place, then we played with my family and then my cousin Nona spotted a pirate on the Otahuhu Park.
Then, my cousin Nona got scared so she said to me and my family and Mum got scared then she and my family and my Mum got really really scared. So then we went inside and then we all went inside the room.
We all got scared in the room. We all went to get my Mums phone. Then we called the Policeman the police got the pirates. My family is happy now and my Mum saw the police take all the many pirates. The pirates were scared.
The Cook Islands are the best country in the world to live in by Faith
The Cook Island is the best country in the world
by Faith
The Cook Islands are the best country because you can go to the pools!
You can spend time with your family and you can spend time having fun with your family!
I am sure you can agree that The Cook Islands is the best country.
I agree that Cook Islands is an amazing country and it is the best!
You can spend time with your family and you can spend time having fun with your family!
I am sure you can agree that The Cook Islands is the best country.
I agree that Cook Islands is an amazing country and it is the best!
Children should get pocket money! by Faith
Children should get pocket money!
by Faith
Everybody can agree that children should get pocket money.
Firstly you can help out your family, getting them amazing clothes. It is respectful to spend time with your family too!
It will be amazing to clean with your Mum so you can get pocket money.
You can even give your family pocket money so they can maybe get homework books for them too!
Then you can go to the shop to get a homework book to get smart too, with your family! Children should get pocket money!
Descriptive paragraph: Autumn by Faith
by Faith
I see trees around me. It is colourful and pretty. The leaves are colourful too. Woohoo! It is going to be winter. I see cocoa dripping from the mug. I can see orange and yellow trees and leaves around me, it is the fall.
Birthday by Faith
Birthday
by Faith
Woohoo! It is my birthday today! It is going to be fun and good. Yes! We are going to the park! Woohoo! We are going to get ice-cream! My flavour is chocolate. I am 7 years old and I love my family. I have a good day! I played with my family on the park! I saw people playing on the park too. I smelled food and it is pizza. I eat pizza too!
The Zoo by Faith
The Zoo
by Faith
I saw a cheetah and people. I felt a cheetah too. I smelled banana, then I smelled food and it was McDonalds. The tigers and cheetahs act happy and good. We played with the tiger! I had an ice cream, it was chocolate. I love my family! I heard tigers in bed and cheetahs in bed.
Character description: Simba by Faith
Simba
by Faith
The colour is yellow, he is long and big.
He looks cool and is fluffy.
He acts cool too and nice.
His friends are cool too and he is happy, he acts happy too.
Wednesday, September 15, 2021
Lockdown Learning
Shazim has been doing some learning from home! Keep up the good work Shazim!
Writing:
Children should get pocket money! by Zinnur
Children should get pocket money!
by Zinnur
All children should be getting pocket money so they can save their money. They have to clean up after themselves because they can get pocket money from their parents and when they clean they can also get pocket money for when they do work.
Children can have pocket money and they can buy some things like a Ps5 and birthday presents or even some school supplies too. So kids should also learn not to be spending their money on everything.
Kids would not be very lazy because it is bad. Kids who get pocket money would not be lazy and learn to throw out the trash.
Finally and most importantly, kids should be getting pocket money and they should be not watching tv and they should clean up after themselves.
I have told you why kids should be getting pocket money they have to work hard and learn.
Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in by Zinnur
Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in
by Zinnur
I am sure that Malaysia is the best country in the world to live in because you can eat a lot of delicious food and see lots of different types of animals too.
Firstly, in Malaysia there are cool things in Malaysia. The main animal is a tiger. There are a lot of things to do, all you could ever want.
Secondly, in Malaysia there's cool things you can do. You could go anywhere you like. You could go to the big museum and you can go the rollercoaster too.
I believe you should go to Malaysia because it is the loveliest and most gorgeous country. It has a big waterfall! You could eat lots of cultured food too, like all the rice and curries.
This is why Malaysia is the best country!
Pirate Story by Zinnur
Pirate Story
by Zinnur
Once upon a time there was a girl called Lia! She was with her family which is her Mum and Dad and Emma and Ivy and Mia and Dinasen. Dinasen was five years old and Lia was 21 years old and Emma was ten years old and Mia was four years old. Ivy was 8 years old.
Lia had blonde hair with blue eyes and white skin and a purple bow and her dress is pink and beautiful with a black sport crop top.
Mia has black hair and she has green eyes and she has a pink bow and purple dress.
Ivy has blonde hair just like Lia and Ivy. She has hazel eyes and she has a blue dress. Dinasen has black hair and he has brown eyes and he has a green shirt, orange pants and has cool sunglasses.
They are having a picnic at the beach. There was a pirate coming to the beach and Mia was so scared that she thought she was going to get kidnapped, so she told her parents "Mum! Dad! I saw a pirate! Coming with a boat to the beach!"
"What?! No way! There's no pirates at the beach! They're only at the sea, so I don't trust you Mia"
"Oh I know you never trust me!"
Descriptive paragraph: Autumn by Zinnur
by Zinnur
I can see alot of leaves are flowing on my body and face.
I can see some orange, yellow and colourful leaves and I can see some leaves on the ground.
I can smell pumpkin pie around the trees.
I can smell autumn pie around the forest.
I can taste hot chocolate dripping on my mug.
My Favourite Person by Zinnur
My Favourite Person
by Zinnur
My favourite person is my Dad called Saifuddin. He looks like whitish and he has a beard next by his cheeks, they are brown. I like to go shopping with my Dad and with my Mum because he is the best Dad ever. We played uno with my family and my Dad helps me with my homework.
The End
Character description: Simba by Zinnur
Simba
by Zinnur
Simba has a long tail. His eyes are orange and yellow. His whole body is yellow. He has sharp teeth and he is so soft.
Simba is so cute, his tail is so soft and his nose is pink and his eyes are pink and yellow.
Simba is a lion.
Simba is the kindest animal, he has a powerful roar. He has a friend he becomes bigger and becomes stronger.
Simba was kind and helpful.
Simba was very strong.
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