Pirate Story
Once upon a time me and Hemi and Ngatere and Junior were going on a picnic to the beach. We were so excited to go when we saw a pirate ship full of Pirates! Me and Hemi were very scared of the pirates. There were ten of them, but two pirates were coming for treasure.
We spotted the treasure but the pirates snatched the treasure. Me and Ngatere were so angry we all went to go on the ship but there were pirates all over the place. We all sneaked onto the ship but Junior was caught. We all ran from the pirates. The pirates were looking for us.
We had the treasure but they had kidnapped Junior in a big bag.
When we got back we were sad because we forgot Junior on the ship.
We were all angry at the pirates we all got mad we all sneaked into the ship and we got Junior back, and then we all went to Rainbows End.
By Campbell
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