Thursday, September 16, 2021

Children should get pocket money! by Rynav

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by Rynav

Everybody should agree that having pocket money is a really great thing for kids. When the kids clean the house with their family.

First, let's talk about that kids should get pocket money only when they clean up. Kids wont get pocket money is they don't clean up.

Secondly, the kids never clean but when they clean the house the parents will give them lots of pocket money, like twenty dollars or even ten dollars.

I am sure that all the rubbish will be finished in the house if the kids help the parents.

One more point is that even when the kids get pocket money even more they can save it for Christmas or for their birthday. This is why people should agree with me. That children should get lots of pocket money!!

1 comment:

  1. Great Persuasive writing Rynav. I hope you earn lots of pocket money for your chores. I wish my own children would clean our house. I would happily pay them pocket money. Keep up the good work!

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