Pirate story!
Once upon a time Rynav with black hair and a smiley face and beautiful family were going on a nice shiny day to the beach with his Mum, Dad, Grandma Grandpa and Sister.
Rynav went to have a picnic to have lots of fun they had so much food! Suddenly, they heard a Big Bang! They heard someone screaming Rynav and his Sister were really scared. Their Mum and Dad said “What happened?”
Rynav and his Sister were silent.
After that, Rynavs Dad said “Don’t worry” Rynav and his Sister said “Ok” but they could smell pirate breath
A few minutes later, they suddenly heard stomping coming towards them Rynavs Sister freaked out. His family was so confused.
His family asked “What are they trying to do?”
Rynavs Sister screamed
“I don’t know, '' Rynav whispered. Everything was terrible! Those pirates were really dangerous Rynav was confused his Dad said
“Let’s make a plan!” They all agreed.
His Dad plan was to all hide while Rynav’s sister distracted the pirates Rynavs Dad kicked and punched the pirates
We saw a long tree and baby birds, we saw blueberries and orange butterflies then we heard police sirens coming towards us and the police said “Where are the pirates?”
“We threw them in the long tree, '' we answered. The police caught them and we were really happy because the pirates were trying to steal our money and the police caught them and we had the pirates treasure!
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